Class Twitterive Reflections

In class a couple of students presented their Twitterive's. Below are my reflections to them.
Alissa Francisco:
Her story was the love of softball and how she felt when she quit.
I liked the journal entries of when she played and after she quit. (It was cool how she had them, good draw back)
I liked her quotes throughout. (good way to show you emotion)
The definitions of words were a good choice and that was a great idea.
I liked how she used softball as a person, and broke up with it.
Overall this was a great job by Alissa!

David Reyes:
His place was insomnia.
I liked how it was scattered and hard to follow. It followed with the madness theme.
The comic he used was very interesting.
I liked the way he used his about me, one as normal David and then as his madness character.
This is really about him trying to follow his madness.
Great job also by David!

Christie Johnson:
Outerbanks vacation with family.
Very well organized easy to follow.
Clear place.
I like all the modes of genre she used.
Schedules, lists, maps, menus,pictures.
I like how there are not a lot of words. Pictures are worth 1,000.
I really liked the recipe for the bonfire.
Very clear and well concise twitterive!

Rebecca Crawford:
Three parts with the theme of past present and future.
    Getting a house
        The search
         Getting it ready
          And then finally moving in
    Weddings
    And her 21st birthday
It is organized really well
I like all the six word stories she uses.
Very good job Rebecca!